Typeradio is coming to and end...

Ok, so I took into consideration what I was told in the crit and also the feedback I received from Luke Lobley on wednesday. I have re-thought my second illustration in order to resolve the problem of the two styles clashing with one another. I decided to alter the colours on the laundry illustration which I think makes quite a difference.There are still a few things I need to tidy about before the hand in but I think I'm nearly finished. I just need to record the last few things I did in my sketchbook.

I have already written the evaluation and rationale for this unit so I'm running quite on time I think.